Eyes

[Jing]

The fear is welling in their eyes
I change their hearts and blacken skies
They call me evil, vile, discreet
They treat me as i will not treat
If only they would see the crimes
And pay respects for all those times
Then maybe they would lastly see
The hurt and pain they have caused me

They say their god will save us all
But as i see they only fall
The sickly minds of those in charge
Corrupted hearts of small and large

Open up your eyes you fools
Your being used as all their tools
I only wish to show your views
The other side before you choose
But am i wrong, and not your friend?
To you I'm nothing, I have sinned
I hope one day you see the truth
And break the chains of all the youth

So maybe one day you might see
The things i view, and see through me
See the open world beyond
Or stay your self, a low peon

 

[Lalaith]

That was really interesting to read. It's nice in a sad way. Yeah, I know it's weird to like sad things, but I do. Maybe cuz I rarely feel sad, I don't know...

I really loved this:

They call me evil, vile, discreet
They treat me as i will not treat
If only they would see the crimes
And pay respects for all those times
Then maybe they would lastly see
The hurt and pain they have caused me


I love your poems so don't stop writting them. I'll have something wonderful to read when I need or want to be sad.