Legion

[Jing]

The trilling ever moving signs
Of thrilling ever soothing times
From chilling thoughts of countless breaths
The Stilling wrought by countless deaths

If ever screaming was the mind
Then never dreaming was the spine
The always reaming acts of spite
With constant beaming thoughts to write

Nothing brings but all to fail
Lonely yet they sing their tale
Despite the stings which stop our heart
The constant rings which rip apart

Standing lastly as they know
Demanding ghastly voices throw
Nothing vastly brings them in
All that crassly gives them sin

 

[Lalaith]

This was probably the most amozing of you poems. I don't know it's just so deep in thought.

So full on meaning, so... breathtaking.

Wow, really... It's almost impossible to choose a fav but this one is certainly amongst the best.

Tell me how can you come up with something btilliant in 5 mins. Because this was brilliant. A masterpiece... This is exactely the kind of poem always dreamed to write and was never able to.

And thank you a million times for writting at least one poem *hopes it's not the last* lol

*Hugs* you're the best. ^^