The Begining

Jing

The King Of Bandits
If only you could see my pain
If only I could free your chains
If only you would be my friend
If only i would let this end

You see the pain inside, it's dark
I'm sorry that you tried this hark
But nothing seems to penetrate
As darkness starts to dissipate
Too see the shroud of darkness lift
Can only mean that time will shift
You tried to help too much I know
Now you've become my only foe

If only you could see my tears
If only I could stop your fears
If only you would let me be
If only I could make you see
 

Lalaith

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You know, I'm a bit sad right now and so I thought... I'm going to read Jing's poems cuz that'll make me sadder... or make it'll make me feel better... can't really tell. ^^

Anyway, I loved this poem. It's really sad as all of them. But I like sad things, go figure.

I liked especially the end:

If only you could see my tears
If only I could stop your fears
If only you would let me be
If only I could make you see

So sad!!

I think I'm going to read more *vanishes*