I can hear you screaming
But i don't care
I can feel you breathing
But i don't care
I can see you crying...
But i don't care
I can feel you breathing
But i don't care
I can see you crying...
Why
- Thread starter Jing
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Geer
High Prophet of Blue
Yes, it's short and it would be really promissing if you added more. But I loved it the way it is.
Poems are nothing but feelings expressed in words. It's really hard to do that, not everyone can express their feelings in words. I can't do that. ^^
Well, I really liked it the way it is.
Poems are nothing but feelings expressed in words. It's really hard to do that, not everyone can express their feelings in words. I can't do that. ^^
Well, I really liked it the way it is.
No i think the length is good. If you add more you ruin the depth of it. But then again thats just my opinion.